Homework - email reply to group 1

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Dear Group 1

5 desktop computers of DC12 and 10 notebooks of NB347 have been received
earlier today. However, one desktop computer cannot be booted up (change word: 's_________'). Would you deliver the other (change to: 'e_______ f___ a________') one to me (delete) within this week?

Moreover, the invoice shows that no discount h____ b______ (present perfect passive) given to me. Please check and send the revised invoice for me to arrange payment.

I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Best regards

Mary

Otherwise a good email

Dear Group 1

5 desktop computers of DC12 and 10 notebooks of NB347 have been received earlier today. However, one desktop computer cannot be booted up. Would you deliver the other one to me within this week?

Moreover, the invoice shows that no discount given to me. Please check and send the revised invoice for me to arrange payment.

I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Best regards
Mary