Monday, October 09, 2006

Agreement

Change words in red, hints in green.

Dear Mr. Jones,

Thank you for attending the meeting with us last week. We would like to confirm the agreement of the terms and conditions, as follows:

1. Time of the delivery is 48 hours.
2. It (unclear what 'it refers to) would be free of charge for delivery to our warehouses in Paris, Lyon and Marseille.
3. Minimum delivery will be 1 suit
4. 83 pounds per suit
5. Payment terms is 30 days after delivery
6. Standard fabrics and colours from the Paul Jones catalogue
7. Labelling is “Designed by Paul Jones for LeGrand
8. Accepting (noun form needed) for returns on unsold suits in good condition within three months
9. Refunds by bank transfer within 30 days of return

Could you please draft a contract for us for our review?

Thank you for your kind attention.

LeGrand

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