Garden Renovation

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Dear Sir / Madam

We are writing to confirm the details of the garden renovation project. Please refer to the below information: (word order)

1/ Garden should be attractive to wildlife, with lots of deciduous trees that (verb)____ at least 3 years old when planted.

2/ A variety of flower beds and a large greenhouse are needed.

3/ A pond should be in one corner of the gardens and car parking
space should be in front of the house.

4/ The whole project should be completed in 6 weeks. Total cost of the renovation is $50,000. 50 % will be paid by cheque before the renovation (verb) ____ started. Balance will be credited to your company account after the whole renovation (verb) ____ completed.

Should you have any queries, please contact me at 1234 5678.

Yours faithfully

Mary Chan

Dear Sir / Madam

We are writing to confirm the details of the garden renovation project. Please refer to the below information:

1/ Garden should be attractive to wildlife, with lots of deciduous trees that at least 3 years old when planted.

2/ A variety of flower beds and a large greenhouse are needed.

3/ A pond should be in one corner of the gardens and car parking space should be in front of the house.

4/ The whole project should be completed in 6 weeks. Total cost of the renovation is $50,000. 50 % will be paid by cheque before the renovation started. Balance will be credited to your company account after the whole renovation completed.

Should you have any queries, please contact me at 1234 5678.

Yours faithfully

Mary Chan