Come Everybody! Join our party!
How would you celebrate your kid’s birthday this year?
To have a wonderful and unforgettable celebration, we can provide a fun place with kid’s most favourite menu and exciting games.
You can also get a FREE birthday gift and birthday cake!!!!!
Don’t miss the chance! Dial to Wonderland immediately, your kids must get more than they expected!!!!
Adam's corrections. Change the words in red. Hints in green.
Come Everybody! Join our party! How would you celebrate your kid’s birthday this year? To have (Change to one word, F___) a wonderful and unforgettable celebration, we can provide a fun place with kid’s most favourite menu and exciting games. You can also get a FREE birthday gift and birthday cake!!!!! Don’t miss the chance! Dial to ( C___ )Wonderland immediately, a____ your kids must get more than they expected!!!!
1 comment:
It's easy to read. Kids should want to go Wonderland after reading this advertisment.
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