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New Generation of Portable Computer – SMILE series

Still bringing along your stone-likes and old-fashioned notebook?
Working like a tortoise??

Slim
– Notebook is designed to streamline briefcase outlook
Mobility
– Dual Core CPU is installed and the notebook is powered with built-in Wi-Fi and ready for connection to wireless LAN
Innovation
– Creative ergonomic keyboard design will make your work finishing quickly and more comfortable
Long battery life
– Extended lithium battery can be last for over 15 hours continuous operation
Entertainment
– Built-in 3D graphic technology gives you enjoying 3D games world at any times.


Buy it NOW for Special Offer!!!

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New Generation of Portable Computer – SMILE series

Still bringing along your stone-likes and old-fashioned notebook?

Working like a tortoise??

Slim – Notebook is designed to (conjunction and artcle needed.) streamline briefcase outlook
Mobility – Dual Core CPU is installed and the notebook is powered with built-in Wi-Fi and ___ (verb) ready for connection to wireless LAN
Innovation – Creative ergonomic keyboard design will make your work finishing (word form) quickly and more comfortable
Long battery life – Extended lithium battery can be last for over 15 hours ____ (preposition) continuous operation
Entertainment – Built-in 3D graphic technology gives you enjoying (adjective form needed) 3D games world at any times (one word). Buy it NOW for ___ Special Offer!!!